scud_o ([info]scud_o) wrote,
@ 2007-11-18 23:11:00
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Where Have I Been?
Finishing up 
ONCE UPON A TIME #1
Written by Eric Rampson
Pencils and Inks by Marcelo Salaza
Colors by Bruno Souza and Edson D'Car
Lettered by Eric Rampson










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[info]lalato
2007-11-19 06:15 am UTC (link)
Awesome! More!

--sam

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[info]scud_o
2007-11-19 02:36 pm UTC (link)
Thanks! I have been a comic book reader most of my life, so it's exciting to almost have my first issue in the can.

Any critiques of the lettering? I am doing it myself and learning as I go (which is what has been taking so long).

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[info]lalato
2007-11-19 04:54 pm UTC (link)
I think the lettering evokes a fairytale, and since I think that's what you're going for, it's a success. That said, the artwork is a bit more cartoony than the lettering. That's not really a problem (I like the artwork and the lettering), just that it's something I noticed. Seems like the lettering might be a bit too clean for the artwork?

Just so you know... that's such a minor quibble that it's barely worth mentioning. Good job all around.

--sam

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[info]benchilada
2007-11-21 06:08 am UTC (link)
Suh-wahv.

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[info]brucenstein
2007-11-21 03:36 pm UTC (link)
x2!

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[info]froborr
2007-11-23 01:35 pm UTC (link)
Sweeeeeet. Love the art, particularly the costumes.

The horse looks evil, or at least very unhappy to be up at dawn.

As far as the writing is concerned, first page is a little confusing, but by the fourth I know what was happening on the first. You've managed to imbue the two princesses and the unnamed sentinel with quite a bit of personality for so few words.

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